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Adam Fendelman’s “‘Cloudy With a Chance of Meatballs 2’” Is Buggy

In response to Adam Fendelman’s 815‑word review of Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2 on HollywoodChicago.com 

http://www.hollywoodchicago.com/reviews/22554/cloudy-with-a-chance-of-meatballs-2-wins-with-foodimals-overemphasizes-humans

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Adam Fendelman’s “‘Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2’ Wins with Foodimals, Overemphasizes Humans” is housed on an incredibly buggy web-page with even buggier content.

The publisher’s clearing house pop-up ad, while mind-jarringly frustrating, isn’t as bad as the advertisement riddle web-page that even makes scrolling slow.

Fendelman employs awkward language quite often, which doesn’t effectively involve the reader at all. He doesn’t understand that punctuation marks go inside quotation marks, which might make reading audiences wonder whether or not this is a review written by an adult.

Fendelman communicates a rather disturbing obsession with foodimals. He wants to see more character development in the foodimals, which could have been insightful if stated once, but his pronouncement turns into a full-on whine that loops over and over and will unnerve even the most patient of readers.

This review is relatively simple, but far too long to warrant it’s lack of style and unfriendly presentation. The reader never feels engaged and will likely have extreme difficulty reading to the end of the review.

Fendelman claims that adults might need alcohol to enjoy watching Cloudy with a Chance of Meatballs 2, and the same could definitely be said for those adults who attempt to read his review.    

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